Send me your script (no matter what shape it's in) in PDF format only. Let me read it, analyze it, and send you extensive notes . . .



Then during our phone coaching session we will cover the following . . .



MAKE SURE
YOU UNDERSTAND



all seven story-types, and then help you clearly identify which of the seven stories you are telling.



OUTLINE YOUR STORY'S
UNIQUE PATH,



highlighting the specific landmarks along the way: the essential beats, sequences, and obstacles that your story must have to be complete and satisfy an audience.



REFINE THE
STORY ARCS



of all your main characters, so that their journey reinforces your narrative thrust.



HELP YOU STRENGTHEN
THE SUBPLOTS



(complete stories embedded within other stories) and ensure you are not weakening the screenplay by jumping from one central story to another -- and help you discover how to tell the difference.



During our phone conversation,



you will have the opportunity to have your burning questions answered. We will work through any roadblocks you’ve encountered along the way.


My coaching session will help aspiring and current screenwriters write better stories. Structuring a well-told, effective story that studios want to buy and that an audience clamors to see is a skill that can be learned and perfected.


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